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This critique has NOTHING TO DO WITH MY THESIS proposal. You need to read what I wrote more closely. This was merely a critique on another study. My thesis is on a Lo-CHO diet, yes, but is totally independent of this 2 pg paper.
Thanks for the insult; I don't know how it is that my name has been PUBLISHED as author of a study in a peer-reviewed journal. You can confirm that my publication is legitimate: Check out te FASEB journal, Experimental Biology 2003, Abstract # 448.7. You'll see my name, Lindsay Brean. Not bad for someone who you claim needs help with their research writing skills.